i think it's cool how you used words to make a word, but it's kind of hard to read. i think that either the background needs to be brighter or the words do.
I like that your quote spells out a word, and I can kind of read what it says, but I think it would better if it was bigger, or if the whole thing was turned so it was landscape.
The live poster is really cool, i like how you make the quote into the actual word. It is a little small and its hard to read the words in the letter E in the upside down part, which i think size could help.
Very nice how you conjugated a long quote into one simplification. The brown is a cool tone; I could see this in a coffee shop.
The "e" part of the quote is hard to read; I don't know where to go from the "v". I believe by improving readability and maybe spacing/alignment on page you could make this even cooler!
I like the idea of making a quote into the shape of the word "Live" but the only problem is that you have to look really hard to be able to read what it actually says, and there's a little problem with the end of the e, but I really like the point that you're trying to get across with the word.
The quote itself was interesting, but I'm not entirely sure quite exactly what it said. I thought that it was great how you shaped the words of this quote to form the word "Live". I think the colors were good, although personally I would have used something different. My only suggestions would be improving the readablity of the quote.
I like how you spelled out live with your quote.
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I like the way you spelled out the word with your quote and the brown is nice but its hard t follow what it says when you get to the E.
ReplyDeletei like the way you spelled out live when you wrote this, but i cant read what the words in it are because its too small
ReplyDeletei think it's cool how you used words to make a word, but it's kind of hard to read. i think that either the background needs to be brighter or the words do.
ReplyDeleteI like that your quote spells out a word, and I can kind of read what it says, but I think it would better if it was bigger, or if the whole thing was turned so it was landscape.
ReplyDeleteThe live poster is really cool, i like how you make the quote into the actual word. It is a little small and its hard to read the words in the letter E in the upside down part, which i think size could help.
ReplyDeleteVery nice how you conjugated a long quote into one simplification. The brown is a cool tone; I could see this in a coffee shop.
ReplyDeleteThe "e" part of the quote is hard to read; I don't know where to go from the "v". I believe by improving readability and maybe spacing/alignment on page you could make this even cooler!
I like the idea of making a quote into the shape of the word "Live" but the only problem is that you have to look really hard to be able to read what it actually says, and there's a little problem with the end of the e, but I really like the point that you're trying to get across with the word.
ReplyDeleteThe quote itself was interesting, but I'm not entirely sure quite exactly what it said. I thought that it was great how you shaped the words of this quote to form the word "Live". I think the colors were good, although personally I would have used something different. My only suggestions would be improving the readablity of the quote.
ReplyDeletei really like this one. it's simple and matches the quote. i think that the word(s) was/were a little squished. maybe slide it a little to the right?
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